Sometimes poems (or stories) should be left up to the reader for interpertation, especially the endings. I write like that. But I am curious, is this supposed to be supernatural or a human doing bad things to her in the night?

Supernatural, yeah it took me a while to figure out what it was about, I usually write things and then figure out their meaning afterwords, it is supernatural. When I showed this to one of my friends, he thought it was about an abusive boyfriend, and that is a possibility, but when I read it I see a supernatural being whispering and like overcoming her, that's just my interpertation of this story, but as you said the rest is for your interpertation!

Wow. I really liked this poem. I like how you leave it up to the reader for interpertation. For some reason it seemed like it was a nightmare or bad dream that she woke up from at the end. That might be totally off. I do see how it is supernatural. Great job.
~Hannah~

The devil, as always, is by her side
Screaming as he drags her
Again to his hell
Sleeping she awakes
This is her life

loved these lines reminds me of sum1 i knew

loved it... loved it! 5!

well truthfull i didnt nterpert this poem to well it didnt exactly get my attention and i found i trailed off a little bit while reading but for most of it i liked it you have a flair for writting that i can tell even when its not the best of your work..... but hey its my opinion maybe others love it like i do your other work
4/5
bec xXx

Wow. This was magnificent. As most people have said, it's very mysterious. This has got to be my favorite by you. Keep it up.

Okay, at a few parts i got a bit bored and trailed off, but otherwise i thought this poem was very good, and it was also well written. Its just that this isnt exactly my type of poem, but i still thought you did a good job on it. 4/5 from me, keep on writing.
SatuzKa

This was a good story/ poem and read well but the end was too hazy it left too much to my imagination what happend to her? Well it was a good piece of work until the end keep trying...

Well, I must say..this was quite an interesting read. I can see in a previous comment that this involved supernatural forces. It kept my attention, and was dark indeed. The flow was nice, and I enjoyed it. Great job.

~rolo

very dark poem i like devil type poem im a dark kinda guy so anyways not a devil worshipper tho lol 5/5 im adding u 2 favs