That was REALLY terrific!! I could see it all play in my head.. that was wonderful!!!! You are such a talented writer!!! Terrific job!!!
Amy

OMG!! you wrote that so powerful!! I dont even know what to say..I felt so much emotion!! wow..great job.

A very tragic story, superbly told!! The flow was flawless and the descriptions intense!! Great job!!

liked it, nice and dark.... has a good message to it too... never underestimate ppl!! lol, well.. keep up the good work... as if no one has ever told u that b4..

P.S. do you think you could take a look at two of my poems plz("as good as you" & "simply by asking") i would really appreciate it!

Amazing. I absolutely enjoyed that. The use of words was unbelievable.

What can I say... damn it read/flowed in my head like a brilliant movie. It seemd like all that happend was an instant but at the same time so much happens as though taken for granted but that is behind closed doors so who cares...right? -teriffic

Awesome-did the mother tale the tale
? "This would always be her one regret"
either way gruesome and Topnotch

that has o be one of the best poems i have rea on her dang that was really sad i cryed omg good job tho