Comments : Emptiness

  • 20 years ago

    by _the_punk_kid_

    hellooo, cool piece, i thought these lines were really good, 'i want to explode my thought on to this paper
    but i don't even know what they are' but you've managed to get some of the feelings out without realising it... i hope writing it made you feel better too, i thought it was rad well done!:)beanxx oh and i dont kno whats up with the low ratings,ppl are odd but you got a 5 from mee:D

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..i loved this poem..I wrote something similar once..I know exactly what that feels like..that poem totally felt like me..wow great job!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    you have taken the first step to recovery keep writting ang keep walking

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    Another brilliant read ,so far your writing as amazed me.