ooohh I really loved this one. Its so sweet. I love the line:
Is such a sedating thought. I had to read this to my husband, and he really liked it also. But unlike me he said he really liked the fresh water line for some reason. And i agree w/ him. THere is nothing more pure then fresh water. :) Great Job writing this.

Thank you, thank you! No applause necessary...just throw money! LOL.

i swear you just get better at writing poems everyday.. this one was a sweet one!