This poem was inspired by:
1) my feeling crappy
and
2) Aken Sol's "Behind the Mask", definitely a must read, so check it out.

You really feel that way Sean? I mean, if you wanted to talk, why didn't you come to me? Well, i guess it would be wierd to tell me that my poem is a great read and all but don't be embarrassed.
All joking aside, this was a good poem although the ryhming for "test" and "rest" does seem a bit forced. Honest though, if you'd like to talk, I'm here for you.

Aken Sol

I could have written that. I wore that same mask all through HS and still wear it sometimes. You did awesome job, with the wording and rhyming. I could feel the emotion. I bet it felt good to write that;)

A big 5 thumbs

If you ever need to talk, let me know;)
L8tr dude

Kev

Sean it's been awhile...Craig is here so I haven't been on the site as much...but great poem...really feeling this and I remember how it DID feel as well...will catch up with the rest of your poems soon..awesome job!

this is kewl sean...real and raw...and thanx 4 ur comment...i din't know that cyan was bluish ...i assumed it to be like maroon or something..thanx 4 telling me that...
take care
ananya/aka truth hurts

Nice poem man. I know how you feel. Sorry that I'm of few words...but thats just me ya kno? Easier to explain things in person than in writing...on most things.