Not one of my favs here, I wrote it awhile back when I was really depressed over something as I'm sure you can probably tell by now. |
by Terray
wow I really liked your poem you did a great job I gave you a 5 I knew and know what you're talking about but great job. |
by Sarah
Those are questions we've all asked ourselves a time or two! And life is tough at your age...but never forget you have a gift of word...use it for letting your problems out. This was beautiful! Bravo!! |
Oh my, this is brilliant. very simple but at the same time, very deep asking questions that we all ask during our life. we all get insecure. btw, i think you are very talented. xmollyxx |
by Chelsea R.
I liked this...it was simple but deep and strong at the same time. And it got the point across. |
I agree totally. This is a 5. |
very, very good! Simple, yes... but powerful, too.. and it will reach out to many people... I don't know anyone that could honestly claim they haven't felt the same as at least one fo those lines! Very good! |
by Timothy r
I know what Ann means, I think everyone asks the same questions all the time..very good poem Erin, Love, Tim |