it was good, didn't like how you ended it the flow kinda stopped. Some parts kinda threw me off like you were going back and forth while writing it. Anyways it was good.

Great poem though it's really sad and about my poem well we used to be friends and he seems to be fading away because he's been involved with a lot of drugs and alcohol and every now and then he says that he's going to kill himself. We used to be together but he was cheating on me and he didn't even care about me and he still doesn't care what I do. I still have feelings for him even though it hurts and everything is going wrong in my life and watching him hurt himself is making my life worse and it's just really hard. . . but sometimes things get better that's y i'm still around i guess. . . keep up the writing

Love, Taylor

see when i read your poem i figured there had to more going on than what you were saying. i bet that is hard to deal with! you are going through alot and you should be careful. life is so hard but nobody really knows what that means until they've been through it. and i say mostly everybody knows how tough it is! and i'm glad you're still around!

omg, i am so sorry. i just read through my poem and realized it doesnt really make sense. i was kind of in a rush when i wrote b/c i was so mad. but let me clear it up for you.

my mom is always telling me that i will never succeed in life. she is very...um...i dont know how to put it but she's very miserable and it's b/c of my dad. so everyday she takes it out on me and says all of those things. and since i look like my dad that makes her even worse. if i do one thing that reminds her of him then she says i'm going to be just like him: a failure and have no life.
so basically my mom hates me and wishes i were dead and i weren't then she wishes she was. she ALWAYS says that my dad and i are going to be the death of her.

i hope that kinda clears it up for you. sorry about the confusion.

wow...another good one! i am not surprised!

thank you all for commenting especially on this poem. it means alot to me.

thats dark man (or girl)

thats so..wow..that i cant even put words to it...keep up the good work.

this is a sad poem but i am glad you shared it. well written

Well you commented on my poem and I think this is a good poem. Trust me Iknow exactly how you feel my mom was with my dad and she didn't even love him she went with him cause she had to so i'm like the by product of that relationship and i always feel the resentment

like holy shit! i cant belive that! wow....nicly writyen, check out my poems sometime

oh my gosh! that mother should be slapped in the freakin face! but good job on the writing....

a very good, dark poem, thank you for your work

wow! this is definitely freaky. (in a good way!! ha ha) i hope that ur mom didnt talk down to you like that!!! this was very nice, but one critique i have is: (and idk if you wanted it to sound this way but...) some of ur stanzas vary a little in rhyme scheme and syllable length... consistensy always sounds better... but again.. i didnt know if u WANTED it to come out that way.. well i just thought u might want another comment! i'll read some of ur other poems later when i have time.. b/c they definitely sound interesting!!

luv inna

learn of me, live through me, love only me: INNA

wow i know just what u are tryin to give out in this poem well done amazing talent !!!!!!!!! well done if u have any spare time please check out some of me othr poems !!! well done again 1 xxx

i like it!!!

wow Andrea tough life you leave, keep your head up, you are beautiful.. thank-you for sharing a piece of your soul with us

Well well well... Your mum and mine should form a club, mine does an incredible job making people miserable.