oy! Scottsical! tehehe, I told you I liked your poem already, but I'm gunna write in here now! haha, and don't eat too much cake! right? ooh well, I dunnu what to write! haha, ttyl
-the ex-pillow hehe

nice poem..i can relate to your feelings...awesome job..keep it up <3
-Mortalidaga
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I'm feeling myself decay
Because it hurts to be alive

^ Amazing lines. Great poem. Keep it up!

The entire poem was truly brilliant, but I thought the last two lines to be the best. Wonderful job.

Megan §

5-"excelent"