I think that good has a stuttering problem. LOL. I liked it, the poem, that is. Out on the edge a little, but good.

Rutha - Ruth: I notice that you enjoy going around an bagging alot of ppls poetry on this site - piss off if your going to do that you stupid idiot! We are here to support each other and provide constructive critisism not bad mouthing as you do so F%ck off!

Anyways....this poem was really different but i enjoyed it , it compelled me to continue reading to the end and the descriptions were great...i almost felt like i was Olivia for a moment there - i really loved your poem and its uniqueness! Thanks for sharing and dont worry bout that Ruth/Ruth wanka i have seen her commenting rude things on quite a few ppls poems - whatta tosser...LoL Keep up the great work!
Eirisa xoxo