by Unseen Exposure Sep 9, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You're supposed to be my father, |
by pinkalias
i kno im becomming a fan,lol. but i liked this poem, its as lovely as your others. and i like it caz i know EXACTLY how u feel. this poem is almost the same relationship that i have with my own dad, |
by Roula
oh wow this was amazing ... i hope its not true ... i've read lots of poems regarding this issue ... but i still cant imagine how a parent can neglect or abuse his or her child in any way ... ur a very good writer ... i liked the rhyming style, nice idea ... :) |
by Kevin J
I think you did a good job;) |