Aww another sad poem... I'm sorry about your dad Hayley. This was a really good poem, I loved the last stanza... it was such a good way to end this poem. As always, keep writing and take care of yourself! =)

~Grace

wow... very touching.. so sad that you had to go through this... this will hopefully touch people that are doing the same way, and maybe get them to change their ways before it's too late.

Very well done!