Comments : True lies

  • 20 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Ignore your reality,
    Stand in your place

    Fake your ok,
    With a smile on your face.

    ^ That part really affects me. Another great job ...

  • 20 years ago

    by Foresaken_Tears

    yeh me 2, u wouldnt believe how true to me that poem is... thanks 4 commenting.

  • 20 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    great poem, i liked reading it, well i thought it was really great writing, lol. you can understand everything. great job!