Wow...amazing poem. You're a magnificient writer so keep it up!

xxxMichellexxx

really nice poem, good flow, and you expressed your feelings really well

Wow...I see that you are going through depression? I'm so sorry hun. Whatever it is that is burying your down, I hope you can get back up and feel the warmth of the sun again! I use to do the same but I no longer do it, Great Poem by the way, you hit the descriptive part just right and the flow of words were great. Keep writing, Thank you for the comment on my poem too =)

Take Care, Jessica xx

wow...that is really a great poem! you have talent and you shouldnt waste it so keep writing!

Very morbid and dark. Good job.