omg, that totally through me for a loop. It started off wierd cause i had just had this crazy dream about house being haunted only instead of a little boy there was alittle girl anyways before I start rambling about my dream I have to tell you I really like this poem alot!!!!! I love how you made it start off like a ghost story, but completly changed it in the end, I love poems like this, this is great i had to give a 5/5!!!!!!!

cool! i like this one! i like that he wasn't killed he found out how to travel through time..nice idea!

Oh LOVED THIS POEM - well done on a spectacular write timothy! This blew me away the descriptions you used were soooo vivid i felt like i was there and the ending was gold! Loved every line and look forward to reading more of your poetry!
Eirisa xxoo

Eirisa:
Thank you, thank you very much! (my Elvis im personation)