by xo Shan ox Sep 10, 2004
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You've said hurtful things. |
by mike
Nice poem |
by xo Shan ox
yeah I'm gonna make a part two probably or something like that I just didn't have time |
by Eibutsina
Oh i like the beginning but i think you need to finish it or end it in somw sort of way i just felt that it was cut too short when i was reading it but its a great effort :o) |