OMG Your onmy favourites i love your work for real you are amazingly talented and this is just another masterpiece you can add to your list! Nah im off to read more of your fabulousness!!!

Lol. So Kobe, ever talk to that gurl again? ;-)
Aken Sol

LMAO..haha omg! Kobe? thats funny...dam you are truley talented boy! You are onn my favorites! Well worth a five..or higher...Much love ~Chelsey~

That was really good, until the end. The end was good and all, but not as good as the beginning

omfg was the end true? coz if it was that sux ballz. hah that sounded like fun!!

xxoo,
alysse

Hi everyone. If you like this poem, go check out its prequel, "My First Time"

haha that was so funny

better than the 1st. omg. you are on my favorites. loved it

your first second and third times were way out and i'm feelin them in a funny way.

LMAO!!THIS POEM WAS GREAT!! KEEP IT UP!! :)

Wow... That would suck. I'm sorry. Great poem though! Twisted ending... I like that.

~BJ~