by Ş∂ņÄħy∂ Sep 10, 2004
category :
Special events /
wedding
After a long night she wakes up slowly, |
by Mustardhart
Was just wondering what you meant by "she gifts him a gentle kiss" and the line "wakes up and come" |
by Eibutsina
A vividly descriptive poem, that was a pleasure to read girl - i think it just reinforces the whole typical girls dream wedding and i hope you find the perfect man to give you that one day! |
by Allen
What a beautiful and sweet poem, I want to find a bride like that one day :) Keep up the good writing :) |
by Gary
It seems to me u r bit confused...Once again a lovely poem. You are too good. |
Great work, Trincy! Brain-dead? I think not...but sometimes some of my best poems are made when I feel like I am brain-dead! |