Sounds like a plan! Great poem. I hope your future experiances as a bride will be as, if not more rewarding.

Great work, Trincy! Brain-dead? I think not...but sometimes some of my best poems are made when I feel like I am brain-dead!

It seems to me u r bit confused...Once again a lovely poem. You are too good.

What a beautiful and sweet poem, I want to find a bride like that one day :) Keep up the good writing :)

A vividly descriptive poem, that was a pleasure to read girl - i think it just reinforces the whole typical girls dream wedding and i hope you find the perfect man to give you that one day!
Such talent girl well done keep it up!
Eirisa xoxo

Was just wondering what you meant by "she gifts him a gentle kiss" and the line "wakes up and come"
You are truly and realistic dreamer, couldnt help laughing..I did enjoy the piece.
Tahnks for the comments on my poem.
Take care.