by killers kiss Sep 10, 2004
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
There I am there I stay, I remain untouched as they fade away |
by celi
nice poem, i like the rythm |
by cant sleep
this thing has some good rhyming schemes in it, but it doesnt keep it up. i dont really understand it that well, but it has its good parts. really it does. just work on the whole rhyming thing, cuz your writing would be soo much better, if it stuck to one type of scheme, and stayed with it. |