thats sa little spooky best peom i have read

That's a very nicely written poem!! Wonderful job!! You're such a talented writer!!!
Amy

wow!! that poem was just.....wow..i dont even know what to say...so powerful...really got me thinking. good one!!!!

wow amy..that one does it...that was great...awesome i should say...keep up the great work
maybe you could check some of mine out sometime...id like an opinion of a reall writer....
Kerri

that was an amazingly touching poem. The words ring true and as sad as it is...it was a wonderful story. Nicely portrayed. Jamie

Extremely well written. Kind of ironic though, because I'm now considering which one I should choose..........

Okay - this poem itself was terrific...amazingly well written, emtional and descriptive - i commend you for that...however not taking away from the beauty of the poem itself...the message your giving to younger and depressed ppl (who often visit the sad/depression poems) i think is just wrong...just like alot of ppl commented on hmmm i wonder which one i should choose now - it sounds sort of like you are promoting suicide and i dont think thats very responsible of you at all ...i dont wanna sound mean and please im not bagging the talented poet that you obviously are... i just think you think twice about posting poems with such messages and the influences they may have on ppl reading them...anyways thats my opinion i hope you can work with it!

Much Luv an please no hard feelings at all :o) Eirisa xoxo

a little bit sick but brilliantly written!