Wow, this was awesome Ben! The lines all fit perfectly together and I liked how you used the rose and thorns idea. Very creative. Just two things, I think you mean "scar" instead of "scare" in your first verse, and it was a beauitful poem until the last line..No offence of course..but I think it just..didn't go. That's my opinion though. Otherwise, Great poem, hope to hear more from you soon.
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Awesome imagery...the way u used the rose and the thorn was awesome...love to read your poems...very creative and original

awesome awesome.... like the idea of the poem to!! cept the last line.. as the fisrt comment said.. it just doesnt fit... but than eagain its a unexpected endin and its kinda coo!!