by Robert Sep 11, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Have you felt so cold you knew you were dead, |
by Dorotea©
I liked the idea but something doesn't seem to be right here. Maybe it's the words you used to something, but it needs more work. Maybe revise it and take out some parts..I don't know...but it does need more work. I liked the idea though and it was nicely written. Take care, |
wow loved it:D |
by ** JeNa **
wow ur such a talented writer and i know ur writing will take u far, keep up the great work, great job!! |
by Amanda
Aww so sad but a great piece of poetry! Really brilliant! :) |
by NoPatience
this poem is really .... amazing. keep up the good work 5/5 |