What is "sunrise3e"? it was very interesting.

really good. 5/5 I'm adding you to my favorites.

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Again great poem... please read and comment on some of my poems as well... i would really appreciate it.

Thanks ~ Tina

It has a couple grammatical errors; but, all in all, I liked it. Another great poem from you.

WOW! This is a really great poem! I loved it a lot, u have got talent!
Love alwayz....
Haily

this poem is really .... amazing. keep up the good work 5/5

Aww so sad but a great piece of poetry! Really brilliant! :)

wow ur such a talented writer and i know ur writing will take u far, keep up the great work, great job!!

wow loved it:D

Jacs
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I liked the idea but something doesn't seem to be right here. Maybe it's the words you used to something, but it needs more work. Maybe revise it and take out some parts..I don't know...but it does need more work. I liked the idea though and it was nicely written. Take care,
Satuxxa