dayumn! i wish i could write like that!^.^

excellent poem!!

good job. I liked it. 5/5 ~keep it up~

-no more

Excellent Excellent EXCELLENT!
~Hina

In some ways, I can relate to this one. Well done....struck a chord with me.

another good poem..keep it up.:) 5/5

shannon<33

that's a great poem, I totoaly agree.

Beautifully written poem, and great theme- its SO true! Well done Rob.. and nice name too :) *giggles*