very nice rhyming scheme and well done. shows how you can make great poems out of the simplest things! take care:)

haha, ths beautiful poem coming from the guy who said he wasn't gud nough to write? whoa allen u r so modest! i really liked it, ts really expressive. keep it up!!

xxoo,
alysse

Aww.. the ending was nice. Sweet poem.. Piano and love are old friends.. They got along with you so well! He hee..

Oh I love the piano! So beautiful! As well as your poem! =) Great job and take care!

~Grace