wow!! What a great piece of writing you got yourself here hun! It's such a sad poem! It reminds me of myself really. You wrote this perfectly, I could actually see this happening! Great work! Keep writing! By the way, thank you for the comment on my poem, much appreciated =)

Take care, Jessica xx

good job...keep writin..ever git the chance check out sum my poems

That was very good. Kepp up the good work, if you can check mine out and vote and comment them. thanks

Words can't describe the depth and flow you bring here! 5/5

Wow, beautiful poem! It is so sad and heartfelt....sucj depth and it is a joy to read...

"a kiss can tell... I know the whole story"
this part is what i like most.. Keep it up 5/5
regards,
Shokry

I often wonder if love's light can overcome the dark sorrow....for there are always shadows on the brightest days.....