Summer Love Gone Wrong

by Jacki   Sep 11, 2004


Her hair perfectly placed
reaches the center of her
toned trim back.
Pretty Flowers dangle from
the sides.
The sun beats off her
golden locks.
Her white proper dress,
flowing in the wind.
As she runs through the field.
Barefoot,
Smiling,
Laughing,
Looking back.
She falls backwards into
the water,
Her arms reach out
Her eyes close,
her smile is infectious.
Slash.
Taking her hand pulling her
wet hair back out of her face.
Spitting the water that
has gotten into her mouth.
Moves her finger as to tell
Her man to come here.
You see her swimming
towards the ledge
of the land.
Her white proper dress
thrown in the sand.
Giggles fill the air.
He jumps in after her.
She screams
such playful dreams they
start to have.
Embraced into his arms.
There mouth entwine
with such passion.
He whispers in her ear,
I have something I need to show you.
She starts screaming YES!
But he looks at her confused.
She thinks hes about to propose
and there love will always grow.
But he reaches down to his ankle
a knife perfectly placed,
Hidden so she couldn\'t see.
He grabs her head
and plummets it into her stomach.
Her eyes widen
her mouth gasp,
She can not speak,
but looks down at the
blue water turning red.
He smiles at her giving
her one last glimmer of
fake love.
Then holds her head under.
Panic hits her,
Her arms hitting the water.
Soon she weakens,
soon the bubbles are no more.
Her lifeless body floats.
He picks her up
throws her over his shoulder.
Carrying her back to the land.
He walks to his truck
and brings back his shovel.
He begins to dig the hole
throwing the girl and her
white proper dress in there for
eternal rest.

Jason & Timothy this ending is for you ;)

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  • 20 years ago

    by Hannah M.

    Wow. That was great. Killer ending. Really surprising.
    ~Hannah~

  • 20 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Incredible, it really gripped me. But may I point out that slash should be replaced with splash. A minor error but all in all definately worth a 10. Keep it up.