I love it! The end kinda confused me but i'm just not all here! But i really did love it! |
by Eibutsina
And enjoy reading it i did! WOW your so good at writing depressing poetry Amy....everytime i read your work it gives me chills - another wonderful piece to add to your list hun well done |
by fear no pain
dude, thats kinda depressing...a 9 yr old killing herself cause she didnt have a box to cry in...i can fully relate to it, cause i was that 9 yr old..cept im still alive..but to you ignorant people who say, "Why would some kid kill themselves over a box? I don't get it." It's that she was so sad and miserable because of her parents not paying her any attention, she didn't want to cry anymore, she wanted to have a place to keep her tears, a place to put away her sadness... |
by olivia
That was a mazing poem i loved it great job. |
This was awesome tears...so sad :( |
by PAUL HEWSON
its a sad story , am pleased iits not true .. i do like the way you write . very gifted |
by Desert Rose
damn man you are really good i cried on this poem wow |
This was a trully wonderful poem. All of your poems are just amazing, but this one really just, stood out above the other ones. I'm sorry for the people critizizing you over the childs age, and the place you chose for her to lock away her tears. This poem was just...great, don't worry about what other people have said. |
by Madison
Hey! WOW great work! 5/5! It was so nicely writen. Keep up the great work |
by HOLLY ARMER
Beautifully tragic. This poem expressed so much sadness. Very creative...good job! |
by Ann Stareyes
One of the best I've ever read. You done a super job with choosing exactly the right words. Keep up the good work. Sad, but enjoyed. lol |
by Ann Stareyes
A tear jerker for sure. You are very talented and gifted. Sad but Enjoyed. Keep up the great work. lol |