I like this... But in i think its line 8 shouldn't it be *your instead of you.. Just think it would make a little better sence that way! Keep it up!

Marie

Thanx, that's what it should've been. Guess that's what happens when you're thinking faster than you can type!! Thanx!

Sarah

very very nice! I like the 4-2-4 stanza set up...something out of the ordinary! it flows so wonderfully! As for the conent,againis seems like you have peeked into my heart and written about me!

Great work!

wow great poem!!