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by Chasityy Sep 12, 2004 category : Love, romance / lost love
Hello my love, my all what has seem to gone wrong? I thought we had it all, Now everything you said is wrong? Hello my love. my all i meant i love you, when said Now my head is lowered the leaves that fall, the color red all laugh to see me fall hello my love, my all i never meant to make you cry but why did you watch to see me fall can u tell me why you said goodbye? This is good-bye My last call you never fixed my broken wings just stared to see me fall now its my turn, good-bye my love my all.
by Chasityy
thanx robert^.^
by Robert
That was good it flowed real good
its not very good... ill admit...comment and tell me what i can do to improve on my writing skills please