Lost life

by Chasityy   Sep 12, 2004


Hopes and dreams
shattered and tossed
praying to God
this hope was lost

i don't understand
what really happened
but after that friend
my heart was shattered

Hopes and dreams
shattered and tossed
praying to God
this hope was lost

Can you tell me
why you didn't hold on
can u tell me
why u didn't stay strong

so many questions
not many answers
but can you tell me
what went on

My mind still ponders
my soul still lost
awaiting the day
to see your face
can you please shake me
wake me up from this bad dream?

Hopes and dreams
shattered and tossed
Praying to God
this hope was lost.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Robert

    Very well done good work the wording was great and the emotion was bold good work keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Chasityy

    ^.^thanx

  • 20 years ago

    by Likke.a.demon!

    thats reaaallllyyy good!

  • 20 years ago

    by Chasityy

    this one doesnt make much sense...i write alot when im upset and my hand never stops writing when i start this is what came up...comment and tell me what i need to do to improve it...thanks

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