Great poem.It was really very touching.
take care

nice job..very true

This is very touching. I think we can all relate to it at some level. I do ask myself at times why God would let me into heaven with the sins that I have committed.

To say the least I am not perfect and I sin daily despite my best efforts.

I like the fact that this speaks everyones thoughts at one time or another. Everyone has had doubt in their lifetime and few have had reassurance.

Thank you for writing this and letting us know that no matter what we are not alone.

--Sher

Brilliant poem MDN! :) I love reading yours because they are always filled with hope and love and faith - faith at the end that there is a chance for all of us - which is how I think God would have wanted his Word to be spread rather than fire and brimstone.

I liked at the end how you changed it to "their heaven".

Nice read

Mo

True brilliance!

WOW! I have truly felt this way on several occasions and I am so relieved that now I am in a church that does not judge me nor make me feel like I will never be allowed in heaven.

I love the message and storyline behind this. I love at how in the end you still rely upon Jesus and not all the hypocrates.

This is very powerful and emotional for me. I love the fact the you could still see the truth at the end of the dark cloudy day and trust upon Jesus to take you and even ask that HE show mercy on judgement day.

Just totally awesome! I love it!

The title of this poem was unique
you show how others can judge people so harshly
i like this poem, you wrote incredibly well as always

Nice poem.I can tell you put a lot of time into it,then again maybe your just gifted and did it within a blink of an eye.Either way you look at it it was a great poem. 5/5

Wow.im speechless..this was very interesting..and actually made me think..
5/5 excellent!!

Very touching and interesting, yet beautiful at the same time.Flowed wonderfully.
5/5

5/5. Finally a poet who understands the importance of rhythm with rhyme--I guess I shouldn't expect anything less from one of the greats on this site. I love the line "For those thirty pieces of silver, they say you and I can hold His hand"; it's such an effective criticism of the practice of indulgences and other similar institutions. Excellent work... is "keep it up" even necessary? Lol.

Very interesting poem, great rhyming flows very well. very fresh and original! Brilliant work!

SIMPLY OUTSTANDING!..

LOL.
Olwin

I like the repetition you used with the title it made it almost like song lyrics. So hard to distinguish between what is wrong and what is right in biblical terms. I say as long as your a good person and your not out commiting crimes and killing people you'll be okay haha or should be. Nice job as always 5/5

Great work, how on earth do you come up with ideas for your poems? I have a lot of trouble finding a subject.

Nice work! I love the repeating of the title. It makes it intense and it's awesome to have faith. 5-5.
[[a.k.a. Waking Freedom]]

"They'll never let me into heaven, because I will only make it rain.."
I love this. You did an absolutly amazing write. Ive alwaysed believed in heaven and hell...tho in my eyes...its your creation. I never believed in "one" image of it. This poem was really touching. keep it up.

victoria

The last line is the best great poem it deserves nothing less then a 5

Ohh...I really like this one =D
It have great rhyming and I just love it so much =D
It sorta reminded me of a song. It was just amazing.
5/5

--Hannah

This poem had a lot of emotion in it for me. The desperation, saddness, hopelessness... but then also the acknowledgement, acceptance. My favorite line was:
They'll never let me into heaven, because I will only make it rain
amazing.
5/5