My Own Room

by Katie McCullick   Sep 12, 2004


As you can see I wrote this when I was 13.

I need my own room,
My life would be much better.
Sisters make it all a gloom,
I wish a monster would get her.

They say you sow what you reap,
Or you reap what you sow.
I never get any sleep.
This gardens more than just one row.

I would feel very grown,
since I am thirteen.
If I had a room of my own,
It would be a wonderful scene.

Would you please listen,
I feel as if in a tomb.
Take my life from this prison.
I need my own room.

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  • 19 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was a really cute poem. I can totally relate. I used to have to share my room with my little sister, and I hated it. You made me laugh. Keep it up!
    ><> Kiesha

  • 20 years ago

    by mita

    I need my own room,
    My life would be much better.
    Sisters make it all a gloom,
    I wish a monster would get her.

    thats was cute and funnie keep written you gots skillz

  • 20 years ago

    by Marie

    Very nice!! I like this its really funny (at least i think so) Keep it up!

    Marie

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