"Like rain, into a river,
Like a river, into the sea," great words!!
n the poem rocks!!
the endings really sweet :)

you had a really great rhythmic flow going on with this poem Robert - im so inspired by you hun and yet in such awe at the same moment - your an astounding poet i cannot wait to read your collaborative book one day - because you certainly have the words and talent to achieve that - the sky is your limit :o)

Luv Always Eirisa xoxo