Unbreakable Souls (supposed to be a song)

A hollow heart,
More broken dreams,
Forgotten tears,
And tattered jeans,

From the angel's wings
God made heaven's toll,
Why can't God make me
an unbreakable soul?

A silent prayer,
A shattered hope,
With each new fall,
I learn to cope,

But I've hit the end,
And I want to know,
Why didn't God make me
an unbreakable soul?

I'm losing faith,
Reaching for stars,
Living in pain,
Carving new scars,

From heaven's throne,
God reached every goal,
But he cannot make
an unbreakable soul.

So next time you pain,
Don't let down your guard,
Hold fast to your strength,
Store it in your heart.

Cause though God's there,
There's one thing you should know,
God cannot make you
an unbreakable soul.

From falling stars,
To God's rainbow,
God makes it all,
But unbreakable souls.

*please comment & vote, it's the first song i tried to write, please tell me what you think*