totally! i soo agree! that's sooo awesome jamie!! i was singing as i read it. god, its amazing you're so talented! shesh girlie! i can't believe you!! lol keep it up hunnie :D
-Mortalidaga
xxxTakeCarexxx
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ps. Love you :D

awe, thanks girls u are so sweet, i really wasn't sure about the song thing...thanks

i think this would make a very pretty song! excellent work! it is written very beautifully.

THAT IS SO AWESOME!!! OMG I WISH I WOULD WRITE THAT WELL and yeah it would be cool w/ music behind it keep it up!!

Emmerz

ps check out some of my poems if ya get a chance

Awesome poem.It definitely deserved a FIVE

A silent prayer,
A shattered hope,
With each new fall,
I learn to cope,

Magnificent. This was truly a remarkable poem. Keep it up girl, I would love to read more of your work.

Megan §

I absolutely loved it. I thought it was wonderful ... totally and completely wonderful. Great job!!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! I CANT EVEN TELL YOU HOW AMAZING THAT WAS!!!!! I loved it to pieces!!!!! great job!! beyond great!!! super de DOOPER!!!! wow you have major talent!!!! I would love if this became a song!! it be soo beautiful...WOW!!!!