ooh anger and sadness mixed together...lovely combination. this poem is good.

Good poem.Love does so many things that is always hard to understand...

nice and short. i liked the structure and rhyming of the poem. yeah, love is so unpredictable sometimes. take care:)

this is very good! I know where you are coming from..it's a sad existence to be "alone with someone"

Very nicely written, I love the abc abc... rhyme scheme!

Interesting, I have never seen someone use that rhyming scheme, very unique (I love reading uniquely written poems). Definetely kept my attention, you did well!