i think you should put more emotion and feeling into this poem. let the reader feel your sadness and let them have a broken heart while reading what you've been through.

ok I will. thanks for the sudgestion.

circles are...interesting...oh and something.

Megan what did I say about not talking about circles. cause if you forgot it was not t o talk about it. Call me later tonight Megan.

ok fine and all you said was to say something so i did

megan..........urr you know what I meant. I wanted to know what you thought of my poem. I asked my other friends but you haven't yet. And don't forget to call this time.

sorry but i fell asleep after what you made me do last night. lol. remember you made me post this

god megan I thought that was are little secret.

don't you mean our little secret? geez learn to spell. :)

don't you mean our little secret? geez learn to spell. :)

ok megan you can knock it off you know I wouldn't sleep with you.

i never said you would i just said i was tired cause of what you made me do your tthe one who took it like that.

ok here i'll post for real. i really like it and think you should write more.