You express yourself well through your poetry David and as I have said to other writers it takes a lot of courage to place your poems and allow others to read your inner most thoughts and feelings.
For the fact that you do not know wether comments are going to be negative or positive.
Your poems are something to be proud of, you have a gift.
I like your work David.
Keep on writing for it is the true key to our sanctuary and for our hearts.
Take heed.

~*The true art of wrting befalls in the heart and not from the mind, if it does not then tis not an art of writing...Deaths Maiden*~

Excellent poem,David...5

Wow I really liked this one. Keep it up! =) Take care!

I love this poem too!!!! You did a wonderful job with it!!

Amy

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