My Heart is Broken

by taylortws   Sep 13, 2004


My heart is broken.
Tears are welled up in the corner of my eyes.
It feels like I just died.
She left me.
Why God did you let this happen.
I love her so much.
I put so much time into it all.
I was just too much to worry over.
I feel pathetic.
It’s because I am.
If I were a better person, she wouldn’t have left me.
But now I have to live with a broken heart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    i'm sure it's because you were abad person! keep it up xx (the poetry)
    kt xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Julie

    awww taylor that poem is really good...But so sad! I like your poems!
    Love Julie
    XOXOX

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    i think youve got real talent with poetry but wat you right is very sad, youve had a pretty hard life ay, ive read some of ur stuff and i think youve got talent be happy
    just cuz u lost sum 1 isnt the end of the world
    keep up the good work
    luv rach

  • 20 years ago

    by Jackie Bilson

    Hey I loved your poem . It made me kind of sad because I can relate to it...sometimes I do think that maybe if I had been better, they would've stayed. It would be pointless for me to try and covince you that it wasn't your fault (though, I'm sure it wasn't) since, I can't even convince myself. Great poem though.

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    just b/c someone left you doesnt mean you weren't a better person. there could be thousand of other reasons. so dont even think she left you b/c you werent good enough!

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