WOW that was so amazing! So sad and tragic, very well written. wow..i cant believe no one else has comented. Fantastic work

Thanks Amy - :o) Your a sweetheart!

this poem, is awespme i love the way u right, u write wi such beauty gurl and u got a talent .. lol.. keep it up and ull go somewhere wit it .. EMAIL ME SOON

Omg Eirisa....that was soo beautiful. Like you with my work I'm left speechless. Every word rhyming together perfectly, every event fading into each other in sequence, astonishing. I have never ead anything this incredible on this site before. My work holds no ground when compared to yours.

Oh Richard please your being to nice - i feel the same way after reading your pieces hun, im like what can i possibly say after reading something as exquisite as THAT - thanks Richard...comimg from an artist as yourself your comments are priceless!

WOW!! oh my goodness this was awsome!! Left me with my mouth dropped open!! I absolutley love this one Eirisa..It was amazing..No more then amazing...i mean it was astonishing..I dont know i thought it was beatiful and you did a wonderful job with it!! Love ya much , Ya baby sis, Chelsey

Your poem seemed to leep out, the words you use to describe the picture tells me everything, my mind was envoloped with the surrounding area and the saddness that it has happened.

I did feel sorry for the person, i have read your profile i am guessing this one is fictional ;), cause you can't write poems from beyond the grave, really nice work though, i enjoyed it very well.

i wait in anticipation for your next poem.