Whoa that was amazing work. I remember hearing the title in a song.. lol. But anyways keep up the great work.

Thanks girls i did hear those words from a song on V - THANKS MAROON 5 for your inspiration :o)

But I didn't snake anyones lyrics intentionally :o)

Ahh Maroon 5 is awesome... I loved the title of this poem =) The poem was very good too, keep up the great work and thanks for the comments on my poems! =)

~Grace

Thanks for the comment on my poem, i appreciate the way you always give me great advice and comments and i enjoy reading your poetry. god bless you too.

Excellent write and sooo true;)

OMG gurlie, I love this poem, Its gr8 ! Im checkin out all ur new posts Gr8 job .. dont foget to email me bak !
LYLAS

OMG gurlie, I love this poem, Its gr8 ! Im checkin out all ur new posts Gr8 job .. dont foget to email me bak !
LYLAS

wow gurl what a truly fantastic poem!
You express yourself beyond belief and i am jealous of your amazing talent! Keep it up xxx

thats mindblowing..........thats all i can think of sayin..

thats mindblowing..........thats all i can think of sayin..

Hey ---
wow this poem is so awesome! Great job!! its a $ thanks for your comment I also look forward to more of your work!
---You know how I do---
Amanda

Ok first off Ruth you need to mellow down. Second, Eirisa this was another beautiful piece. I always feel true heartfelt emotions from your work. "All that you do comes back to you by three." Just out of curiousity....is this line refering to the Three-Fold Law? Anyways....great job.

Thanks Richard Ruth is just upset that she has been caught out bad mouthing other poets and leaving mean and rude comments on eveyrones work i have noticed, i thought i would be mature and request her personally that she stops and she hasn't so to everyone i have made a complaint about her and if your a poet who has recieved rude comments from this Ruth (or her pretend twin sister who is actually her Rutha LoL) then i suggest you do the same and let Janis know - thanks Richard! And yes it does refer to the three fold law of karma hun! Thankyou! xxoo

OMG!!1 first of all i know that ruth girl was not talkin to you!! WTF!!!!! please..don't listen to that person I'm sure they are so jealous thats why they have the nerve to tell you to shutup..And secondly..This i swear is like my fav. poem..I mean it was so well told ...great choice of words..and the best meaning a poem could have...I agree with you 100% although i havent been through that many experiences but i thought this was awsome and it dont deserve a five..It deserves way higher!!! You know i love ya and im proud of your talent!!

yea, it was a good poem, but I don't know, I just don't like that you took parts from a couple songs.. but whatev..

Hi Kaitlyn

I was actually a lil upset to read your comment - i did get the idea after hearing a maroon 5 song but my poetry is all original work and i didn't appreciate you saying i had taken lines out of songs and put them into a poem because if you read it properly and in line with my other poetry you would understand where i am comign from with it.
And also if any lines were taken from songs - thy weren't intentional and i take credit for my own original work thankyou!

Kind Regards
Eirisa xxoo

........*stares at the screen speechless* awe inspiring piece.
xnikkix

Yeah I know Julianne - thanks for your feedback the title may be unoriginal and i know that EVERYONE LoL but i hope the content of my poem can help you see past that. Gees man i am never acting on musically inspired poetry again LoL what greif i have got for it - come on guys i have to source this inspiration from somewhere!!!!!!!!

Well personally i liked the poem.
I don’t see what the problem is.
Are we allowed to use things that people have told us as our titles are we allowed to use ideas that come from our friends? our family? our minds? like really i just don’t.. egh anyway i shouldn’t dignify this critical garbage that these people are saying..
Great work Erisa i know that the poem was based on your personal feelings and struggles and must apologise for these small minded opinions that seem not to understand the meaning and intent of expression but i digress.
I like your reference to karma although my mind doesn’t believe in anything of spiritualistic nature, my heart sure does which is kinda hard to describe but your poem stimulates both which is a good thing.

I have top say im quite the opposite though, my younger life not that marvellous but still fairly uneventful, and the majority of my life’s experiences to this date have come this year... i dunno i think that the bliss of ignorance has its charm but its not something that i would wish to return to... i really should find a way of controlling myself from drifting.
I have to say you have taken my view of life well and its a good description on many aspects. I cant say that i am greatly experienced in pain and most people have seemingly had far worse experiences to my own but my prolonged ignorance to them has made me weaker...

The moral of the story is that you have written a great poem with your own feelings and thoughts, I hate to say that i agree with it but i do and i guess that’s just something we have to live with...

I know you have realised this and im sure that you'll be able to carry yourself through. Although life’s not all rainbows and butterflies, there is much beauty in this world and your own poetry is a shining example of it