I loved this poem, you did such a great job!!! =) Thank you for all of the comments on my poems, it means a lot. take care and keep writing!

wow..very emotional subject....very sad but very well writen!

very well written.

touching

Its good that you took of the painin you. But most of the times there will be a good reason behind every dark cloud. Just that we don't understand what it is. IF only God shared the blue print with us.. things would have been easier for us to understand! *Sigh*... What ever it is, Your poems are very touching.. Nice. keep writing. Take care. Love, Trincy.