Dear God

by David Munoz   Sep 14, 2004


Dear God,

Life is hard
But life is good
Why can't I understand it
The way I think I should

Why can't my life be perfect
Why don't you reveal all
If all my future is known to you
Why don't you shield me from the fall

Why can't I change my destiny
Why don't you listen to me
If you really do answer prayers
Whys life not what I want it to be

Why can't I pick the way I look
Why don't you fix what you missed
If you are a loving God
Why do I look like this

Why can't I choose the one for me
Why don't you offer who I think is best
If its true you can do anything
Why did you give me all the rest

Why can't I control my life
Why don't you give what I demand
If you don't want to do your job
Why don't I take it off your hands

Please Read God's Answer In Dear Child

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  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    Wonderful job on this poem!! I know that feeling!I'm off to read "Dear Child". I can't wait!

    Amy

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Poetic Girl - Its part of the desperation of the person writing the letter to god - it just expresses his frustrations with his life and the fact that he believes it is God refusing to make everything better for him - anyways David that is my interpretation feel free to let me know if i am WAY off k?
    Well I enjoyed this poem very much, i look forward to reading the second part and for one of your first poems this is quite an amazing effort really David you should be very proud...i'll keep an eye on the developement of your work because so far i am very impressed...thank you for sharing this piece with us
    Eirisa xxoo

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Good job, David. Keep it up.

    Ashley

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    Absolutely amazing...i love it...as well as "Dear Child"

  • 20 years ago

    by Krystin

    OMGosh... I love these poems SoOoOoOo much... they are awesome... i've wondered the same things before in my life... very good explanation from gods point of few... and great questions from the child.. awesome poems... 5 5 5 all around... keep it up! good work!

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