by ryan maxwell Sep 14, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
A forest in an eye, broken soul, afraid of glue |
It was beautiful and very sweet. Awesome job and keep it up! |
Absolutley excellent poem, so sweet. You are a really good poet from what i see. Keep it up. |
by Nyssa
really moved |
by TrUtH hUrTs
woah!! i'm lovin it(para pa pa paa) |
wow. this is really good. its beautiful. it has a lot of undertones which i like. i really love the second stanza, its really good how you changed half way through it and noticed there's something wrong because i was thinking it was your normal love poem. i like the idea of her being shattered and you being there to put her back together. great poem. tc. xmollyxx |