wow! that was written very beautifully! wonderful job! keep this up.

it has a nice poetic flow impressive gestures and so on

Wow I really liked this poem a lot. I love how you wrote it and it's so sweet!!! =) Keep up the great work and take care!

~Grace

wow. this is really good. its beautiful. it has a lot of undertones which i like. i really love the second stanza, its really good how you changed half way through it and noticed there's something wrong because i was thinking it was your normal love poem. i like the idea of her being shattered and you being there to put her back together. great poem. tc. xmollyxx

woah!! i'm lovin it(para pa pa paa)
{p.s. i know that won't make any sense to u if ur not into justin timberlake)

really moved

Absolutley excellent poem, so sweet. You are a really good poet from what i see. Keep it up.

Kalah

It was beautiful and very sweet. Awesome job and keep it up!

Ten Feet Tall