wow...that was awesome..you';re so good at writing jamie..it flowed wonderfully and the rhymes we're incredible..you're so good it makes me green with envy. You're such an amazing writer...i wish you the best of luck in life hope everything goes good <33
-Sarah / Mortalidaga
xxTakecarexx

hey jamie!! wow this poem was so awesome!!!! OMG it was beautiful!!! your such a terrific writer!!!
I want to thank you for leaving such a wonderful comment on my poem..it meant more than you can imagine!!
I'm glad you asked me to check out your poems cuz they are really good!!! absolutely beautifuL!!!!!! your going on my favorites girl!! you rock!!!!
much love
elizabeth.

This is an amazing piece. So creative. The flow is flawless and the descriptions captivating...Superb job!!!

wooaaah, that was so pretty... dude! well done, the whole thing was really really good :)beanxx