by Bizarre
thanks for commenting on my poem :) |
Omg..this was incredible, it was so imaginary, i could picture every last detail. You did an OUTSTANDING job! im overly impressed! Great job Kevin. Keep it up <33 |
That was awesome. I can just imagine what ot would be like to have to kill someone to escape them. Jeez this poem is good, and i mean that sincerely. Sometimes if I'm browsing on this site and see a long poem I'll just read the first couple of lines to see if i should really read the rest, and this one just drew me in. Very nice, i'm glad it was on the favorites list. |
by Kevin J
Thanx 4 all the cool comments as always...I was hoping everyone would like this. I dont say this much Ok, ever:p, but I was really proud of this one. I put alot more thought into this poem then usual. You'll never hear me brag about my work or ask for comments or votes, not that its a bad thing to do that...that's just not me. |
Wow ...that was awesome....u r one incredible poet...and u say poetry's ur hobby it should be ur proffession |
by pinkalias
this was the most emotional, dark, amazingly talented written poem ive read in a while. its exactly what i was looking for, its so tragic and violent, and just amazing. i dont kno how you were able to come up with such a beautiful way to write such a horrifying story. im definetly planning on reading your other poems |
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by HJ
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by Luvmeluvr
I read this and Murder Seen. Wow. I am in awe. You write beautifully. And the wording is so precise. I completely love it. |