by hayley williams Sep 15, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The crimson blood lies in pools on the concrete |
by Kristin
Creepy...remind me not to become good friends with you! AHH! lol j/k great job! |
a little creepy *scooches away* |
Perhaps it is whack ... but it's good, and I like it!! |
by Eibutsina
Ummm this poem was amazing! Like the stoyrline you used was so very unique and the descriptions and rhythm flowed soooo well together! You did an wonderful five minute job - damn im jealous i wish it would take me five mins to write something this spectacular!!! Good on you hayley this is one of my faves i have ever read on this site!!! |
by Andrea
wow...really good poem! |