that was so sad.. i know where ur coming form though hun :-( My dad was never there for me neither. Stay strong. :-\ Great poem

Im sorry my girl...This is a good poem anyway..Love ya, Tim

P.S. im on aol, drop by

Great job expressing that anger and hate... I love that you repeated the "I HATE YOU" at the beginning of each stanza...and then again at the end...

wow that poem was powerful and very sad!! i hope you feel better!!

Aww this poem was so sad :'( I'm sorry. Great write though!

WOW. This is very powerful. my dad left when i was 6months so i know where ur coming from. stay stong and jeep writing more great stuff. xmollyxx btw, i'm really feeling da 2pac lyrics

aww thats so sad, im feelin' fo yah!